The Writing Challenge

On last Wednesday, I have conducted an essay writing challenge where everyone in 5 Melati had to write an essay about their favourite singer or band. You also had to put as many adjectives as possible to describe your favourite idols. Did you enjoy yourselves that day? I hope the songs I have played while you were writing the essay did not distract your concentration or else next time we could not play anymore songs. : p

As we know, the winner had already been announced in class last Thursday. The winner had written a simple essay but with good sentence construction and minimal grammar mistakes as well as appropriate usage of adjectives in the essay. Congratulations to our lucky winner:

MITCHEL ANAND  =)

Not only that Mitchel has produced good essay, he also has a very nice and tidy handwriting. The other students with very nice handwriting are Marsya and Sohmalar. Enough about that, so here is Mitchel's essay. Feel free to read everyone. To Mitchel, keep up the good work. To the others, you are also good but need to be better!

MY FAVOURITE SINGER

Akon is my favourite singer of all the singers in the world. He is very popular among the Americans. Akon's claim to fame was from the song "Oh Africa". The song "Oh Africa" is in Pepsi's advertisement starring famous football players like Lionel Messi, Thiery Henry, Didier Drogba and Kaka. He has a beautiful and loud voice that brings out his inner soul. He looks cool and stunning that makes girls go crazy. He has a fantastic tone of voice. You can hear it when he sings different types of songs. I wish that one day I can sing like him.

 That's all for now.

Love,

Miss Hana <3